Sunday, October 17, 2010

रात बड़ी अँधेरी और खदशे तमाम है..
जिंदगी कि इस राह में
दुश्वारियां तो आम हैं..

उर्ज की राह तकते रहे..
जब भी आँखे खोली
तो पाया बस शाम है...

बेकरारी जुस्तजू तनहाइयों के रोग हैं
ये काँटों का सफ़र है..
जिंदगी तो बस नाम है..

ढूंढने से नर्म रेशे भी मिलेंगे नहीं..
दर्द सबसे बड़ा रिश्ता है..
मोहब्बत का ही हमनाम है..

आज इन्द्रधनुष कल तूफानों का दौर होगा..
कितनी परतें कई रंग समेटे है..
ये दुनिया बड़ी झाम है..

तुम खोजते हो उसको जमी की गर्त में...
और मै हरबार सोचती हूँ कि
तेरी धडकनों में राम है...

7 comments:

  1. विजयादशमी की बधाई एवं शुभकामनाएं

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  2. सार्थक और बेहद खूबसूरत,प्रभावी,उम्दा रचना है..शुभकामनाएं।

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  3. This must be appreciated for rhiming, prudence of word selection and pursuit of grief reflecting all over through the length of the poem.
    Sometimes it becomes difficult to weave our feeling and thought and find the right representative word for that sinchronous art in the skeleton of a poem. Honourable Poet has burn her alluring energy while making this brilliant effort. Passimism ends with a ray of hope in the last section with obvious affirmation.

    Wish you all goodness

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  4. @sanjay ji.. dhanyawad..aap sabon ka meri kavitaon k lie pyar mujhe hamesha ek nayee urja deta hai..
    aapko b meri shubhkamnaen..

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  5. @anonymoous: thnx for those lovely words.. i think ur comment z no lesser beautiful dan my poem.. well.. dat wl seriously lead me to a greater expression of thoughts.. thnx a lot..
    one question..
    y r u anonymous.. cant we know ur profile..?
    anyways.. thnx again..best wishes..

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  6. Long back I have heard that some poets became famous and got admiration with their Pen-Names, let me admire a promising & diligent poet, as being 'Anonymous' simply like Pen-Name of this admirer.

    Kabhi suna tha kaviyon se-
    Ish Jahan mei KADRADAANON ki kami ho gai hai.

    Aaj ek Kavi ko dekha KADRADAANON ki Kadr karte hue.

    chhand to aapki tarah nahin bana sakta hoon, lekin bhawanaon ka santulan banane ki kosis kar raha hun. Gaur pharmaiega.
    Shukria

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  7. wow... I have been reading all your poems.. and this one says a lot.. awesome is all I can say.. you write really good..

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